Writing 201: Poetry, Day Three – Skin

Thanks for the next great word prompt and also for the opportunity to use Prose Poetry and Internal Rhyme.

The road was almost empty, the heavy rain decided not to stop. If I should be twenty again, I would never allow that terrible slap of life. I wanted to prove I am fast enough and I can manage the speed.  It was just a second and everything turned to black. I still can’t remember anything just the great heat and it felt like my body would get melt into the seat. Though I “escaped” from the dark hands of death, I know what I did. It will be always visible – the price of that sin…
Anytime I will stay infront the mirror, anytime I will touch my skin.


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4 thoughts on “Writing 201: Poetry, Day Three – Skin

  1. Nice!

  2. Well-written narrative. So tragic. Hope it’s not based on a personal experience.

    • Thanks Ryan, and no it is not my personal experience but I know some people don’t appreciate their lives and the price can be very high…

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